MyFavouriteFood
Doyouknowwhatthisis?Guess!Itscolourisyellow.Itslongandthin.Itlookslikeasmallboatandcrescent.Oh,itisabanana.Doyouknowwhatthatis?Guessagain!Itscolourisorange.Itsround.Itlookslikeasmallballandasmalllantern.Oh,itisanorange.Ilikethenalot.Ilikeice-creams.Iliketochewgum.Chocolatesandcandiesareyummy.Ilikethemverymuch.
Howaboutyou?Whatsyourfavouritefood?
【要领点评】
MyFavouriteFood是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心了。
Adreamistoamanwhatwingsaretoabird.Sameforme,Ihaveadreamcareer.
Therearemanycareers,suchasengineer,designer,doctor,nurse,manager,boss,accountant,singerandsoon.ButIonlyliketobeanactress.
Actressisalwaysbeautifulandactive.Theyaregoodatacting,singing,dancing.ForexampleFanBingbingisprettyandtall.Ihopemydreamcancometrue.
In20years’time,youwillseemeonTV.Mydreamwillcometrue.Domybest.
“Nopains,nogains.”Iwillpracticesinginganddancingeveryday.
Atlast,Iwanttosay:“Workhardeveryday.Iamthebest!”
NexttouslivesMr.Lv.Heisamathteacher,heisaboutfourtyyearsoldandlookverystrict.Infact,heisverykind.
Healwaysgetsupveryearly,Andhealwaysgoestoworkveryearly,too.Inclass,heisverystrict.Ifastudentmakesanoise,heisveryangry.Healwaystellshisstudent:“It’shavemathclassnow,isn’tclass.Don’tmakeanoise!Ok?”
Butclassover,Mr.Lvisverykindandfunny.Healwayssaysjokeswithhisstudents.Hisstudentsalwaysveryhappy.Becausethejokeisveyinteresting.
Mymotherinoureyesisabeatifulwoman.shehasroundseyes,longhair,whitecheeks,longeyelash,andblackeyebrowns.sheworksinaschool.afterworksshetakeusfromschoolandwegobacktohometogether,afterthismymotherwillbusywithcooking,cleaningthehouseandwashingdishesandcheckmyhomework.Ithinkeverydaymymotherisverytired,butsheneversaidaword.althoughtsometimeswedonotlisten,shewillbecarefullytoteachus.
Mymotherlovesusandwealsoloveourmother.
今天的第一节课就是英语课，英语是这个学期的新课程。我觉得非常好玩、非常有趣。
英语老师很年轻，长得很漂亮，眼睛大大的，笑起来非常和蔼可亲，她叫沈老师。
沈老师先教我们读“sitdown”和“standup”，有些同学没学过，读出来总是怪怪的，好像舌头打了结，我们都哈哈大笑。接下来沈老师有给我们玩了一个小游戏，老师喊“standup”我们就要起立，喊“sitdown”我们就要坐下，到最后，老师做手势了，她说“standup”却做坐下的手势。这下很多人都闹笑话了，逗得大家哄堂大笑。很多同学都觉得记英语单词虽然很难，但努力地学还是能够学会的。最后，沈老师教我们读字母，我们都学得非常认真。
英语课很好玩，我对英语产生了浓厚的兴趣，我要认真学好英语！
Duringthisholiday,Iwenttosomefamouspalacestohaveagoodview.TheYandangMountaininWenzhouleavedmeaverydeepimpression,especiallythesteepmountain.Inmypointofview,itisturelyawonderofnature.And,Ihadseenthefilm《HarryPotter》,it’sagoodfilm,butthepitywasBlack’sdeath.ThemostexcitingthingisthatIlearnedgolf.Now,Igototheclubeveryweek,asagoodplayer!TheresttimeofthehalfholidayIdidalotpreparationtopassthegrade10ofviolin.Ihavehadasubstantialholiday!
Theskyoutsideisverydarkandthewindblowsthetrees.Thetreeshavetoblendtheirback.Thereisnosuninthesky.Itistwoo’clockintheafternoon,butitlooklikethetimeofseveno’clockatdusk.Suddenly,thereisalighteningandthenfollowingseveral.Laterthethunderalsocomes.Itisveryterrible.Thestormiscoming.
外面的天空很黑，风一直吹着树木，把树都吹弯了腰。太阳也不见了。现在才下午两点钟，但是看起来就像是傍晚七点钟的样子。突然，一道闪电打了下来，接着还打了几次。后面也打雷了。真的很恐怖。暴风雨就要来了。