Myfavoriteperson
Sheisverygorgeouseverywhere.Shehasadimpledface.It’sverylovely,well-featured.Andherhairstyleiscurly,it’sshortandkindofchestnut.Hereyesaredewy.Hernoseisshortbutbeautiful.Hermouthisfull,andthereareeventeeth.Herbackisstiff,soshelookslikea(加上number)“threee”.Shehasaslimfigure,sosheisgood-looking.Herheightislong(身高应为tall)butnottootall.Shealwayswearsatidydress,andhersmileisfriendly.Sheismyfavoriteperson—BaubuzhenLin.
Myself
Ihavearoundface.AndwhenIwatch(应是lookin)themirror,Icanseeapallidface.Iamwell-featuredbutIhavesomepimple(pimples).Idon’thaveanydimple(dimples).
Myhaircutisacrewcut.Sometimesit’scenterpartingandsometimesit’ssideparting.Andmyhairisjet-black.Ihavetwobigeyes,andtheyareclose-set.AndIhavedoubleeyelids.AndIevenhavelongeyelashs(应是eyelashes).
Mynoseispointed.Ihaveapairofbeautifulears,andIhaveabigmouth,sosometimesIamverybigmouth(应为sometimesIamaverybigmouth).Myteethareeven(maybe,it’sjustIthink),andthecolorareblonde.Mychinisround,andmyneckisalittlelong.MybellyisflatbecauseIamtoothinthoughIeatalotofthings(food更好)everyday.Mybackisalittlebended.IamofmediumheightandIamverythin.MyclassmatessaythatIamverycutebutIdon’tthinkso.
Mydressistidyandwell-featured,but(没有转折关系，用and更好)sometimesit’sveryfashionable!
Myclassmate
Sheismyclassmate.HernameisXuBingyu.Herfaceisroundanddimpled.Herhairstyleis(应加上a)ponytail,andherhairisjet-black.Shehastwobigandwateryeyesandlongeyelashes.Shealsohasahigh-bridged(加上nose)andtwosmallears.Hermouthisgenerous,andherteethareeven.Shehasaroundchinandabullneck.Herbackisstiff.Sheiskindofshortbutreallycuteandpretty.Herdressistidyandfashionable,andsheusuallywearsablackblouse.Hersmileissunny.
Wearegoodfriends.
Mybestfriend
Sheismybestfriend,calledWangLinyutong.Herfaceisthin,andbigfeatured.Andshealwayshasdimple(应为dimples)whenshesmiles.Herhairstyleisshortandstraight.Andshehasfringes.Herhairisjet-black.Hereyesarewatery.Shehasasmallmouth.Herteetharecapped.Shelookslike(去掉like)pretty.Shealwayswearswell-dressed(sheisalwayswell-dressed).Sheissobeautiful.Sheismybestfriend,WangLinyutong.
Doyoulikeher?
Themaninthepicture
Lookatthepicture!Thereisanoldmaninthepicture.Hisheadisbald.Lookathiseyes,theyarefishlike,(应加上连词and)theyaresobig.Ithinkhisnoseishigh-bridged,butitisnothooked.Hisfaceisveryflabby.Andhehasabigmouth.It’snotfull.HewearsawhiteT-shirt,(应加上and)hewearsconservative(应用副词conservatively).Hisearslookverysmall,becausehisfaceisverylongandbig.HewearsacleanwhiteT-shirt.
Ithinkthemanisveryugly.Howaboutyou?
Myfavoritestar
MyfavoritestarisZhangJie.Hehasgotaroundfaceandheisthin.Hehascurlyhairandfringes.Hishairischestnutandhiseyesaresmall.Hiseyelid(应是eyelids)aredoubledandhiseyelashesarelong.Hehasgotagreathighnosebridge.Ilikehisteethbecausethey’reeven.Hisbackisstraightandheistall.Heisveryhandsomeandgorgeous.Hisdressisfashionable.
Myfavoritestar
AkiyamaMioismyfavoritestar.Sheisslim.Herhairislongandstraight.Sometimesherhairstyleis(加上a)bun.Hereyesarewatery.Shehaslongeyelashes.Hernoseispointed.Hersmileishappy.Shehasaslenderneck.Butusuallyherdressisconservative,becauseMioisashygirl.Eventhough,manypeopleshoutatherthat(应该为manypeoplecallher)“MissAkiyama”.Herlegsareslender.ButIstillthinksheisverygorgeous.
Myclassmate
Oh,doyouthinkthisboyisreallyill-looking?Heismyclassmateinschool.HisnameisDaiShunxin.Doyouthinkhisfacejustlikesapieceofsquareandwhitepaper?Helooksverypoor.Hishairismattedandbrown.Hehasacrewcut.Hiseyesaren’twateryatall,andthey’refishlike.Hisnoseisalsoill-looking,andit’sahookednose.Hehasjaggedteethandhisteetharen’tveryclean.Heisbended,sohelooksveryshort.Heisuglybutheusuallyhasasunnysmile.Thoughheisreallyill-lookingandeverybodyusuallylaughsathim,hestudiesveryhard!